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Old 12-18-2017, 11:25 AM   #1
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I say recent jam, as its all pretty much ideas I keep working on. Drum pattern and all guitar parts. Me. I need a Bass guitar there is no bottom on end on this at all.
Clearly needs more work. But as usual we do what we can do. Blame Jimi Hendrix for my obsession for this type of rock style. Would rather play with fire roughly, than have a perfectly safe take. With no spirit. Rock on Jim where ever you are. If only I wasn't so talentless. I would really play

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Old 12-18-2017, 04:43 PM   #2
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Cool funky tune! Love the rhythm in that
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Old 12-18-2017, 05:07 PM   #3
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Cool! Some great ideas in there. It builds up really nicely. Bass adding some bottom end thump will really bring this to life.

It has a really authentic rough edge to it...I really like it!
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Old 12-18-2017, 08:40 PM   #4
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Cheers Ron.
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Old 12-18-2017, 08:42 PM   #5
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Cool! Some great ideas in there. It builds up really nicely. Bass adding some bottom end thump will really bring this to life.

It has a really authentic rough edge to it...I really like it!
Going to have to get a bass at some point. Thanks Squid for the positive comments
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Old 12-23-2017, 01:40 PM   #6
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Yeah I'm interested in hearing bass guitar in the mix too. It sounds really good. I like it. I think what it really needs is a vocal line. That may include harmony vocals. Or maybe just harmony vocals alone. I can't ever tell what sounds good until I listen to the recording.

I'm hearing chess game vocals in here. Pawn to queen 4. Bishop to whatever. I'd look up some famous chess game. Nobody makes a chess game into a song. That's why I'd do it. But it's your song, use your own judgment.
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Old 12-23-2017, 06:14 PM   #7
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Yeah I'm interested in hearing bass guitar in the mix too. It sounds really good. I like it. I think what it really needs is a vocal line. That may include harmony vocals. Or maybe just harmony vocals alone. I can't ever tell what sounds good until I listen to the recording.

I'm hearing chess game vocals in here. Pawn to queen 4. Bishop to whatever. I'd look up some famous chess game. Nobody makes a chess game into a song. That's why I'd do it. But it's your song, use your own judgment.
Hi HH Thanks for you thought. If anyone wants to overlay anything on top plz be my guest. I have tried and so far failed to get it much tighter. But the rolling rhythm riff is the most interesting to me about it. If anyone wants to try vocal plz have a go. Sorry the backing wasn't better
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Old 12-29-2017, 08:43 PM   #8
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Nice job - its rockin.
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Nice. Great rhythm work.
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way to cut loose my brother....
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